Bootleg billions update

I wanted to ask the New York comptroller about the questions I raised in my bootleg billions blog, so I cast around for a respectable print publication I could do some reporting for. The New York Sun bit, and said they'd like to run the piece as an op-ed, so I got to work. I added some stuff I'd forgotten to put in the original blog, fixed some dodgy trade-account figures, and generally tightened things up. I also phoned the New York comptroller's office, but all I got out of them was a statement ducking any of my substantive questions and saying that they stand by their numbers.

The piece ran in the New York Sun this morning; it's behind a subscriber firewall, however, so I've mirrored it here. I first gave them 1100 words for one bit of the page; they then decided that they were going to run it down the left-hand column instead, so I trimmed it to 950 words. All went well: I even got an email titled "1st Edit for Read-back" to make sure that I was happy with the final version. Here's the final paragraph, as they showed it to me before going to press:

That, of course, is pretty stupid. Estimates of the global trade in counterfeit goods are only as good as their underlying data, which necessarily must come from component states and municipalities. If the best that New York can do is to work down from the global estimates, rather than producing its own bottom-up analyses, then the main lesson that we can learn from the whole exercise is that none of these numbers really means anything at all.

When I picked up the paper this morning, however, the paragraph had been changed, and now reads as follows:

That is hard to credit. Estimates of the global trade in counterfeit goods are only as good as their underlying data, which necessarily must come from component states and municipalities. We're all for trying to block counterfeiting. It's a serious problem. But if the best that New York can do is to work down from the global estimates, rather than producing its own bottom-up analyses, then the main lesson that we can learn from the whole exercise is that none of these numbers really means anything at all.

The New York Sun is trying to make a name for itself as a hard-hitting, feisty newspaper, but it seems that even signed op-ed contributors aren't allowed to say that something is "stupid": now I know what "hard to credit" really means when you see it in print.

I have a much bigger issue, however, with the two sentences that the Sun added without running them by me at all – the ones which say "We're all for trying to block counterfeiting. It's a serious problem." Firstly, there's no reason why the royal "we" should be used in a signed op-ed. I'm not speaking for anybody else: I'm speaking for myself. I have no idea to whom this "we" is supposed to refer: presumably it's some inchoate group of right-thinking individuals.

It speaks volumes, I think, that the Sun felt no compunction at all in adding those sentences: it probably didn't even occur to them that I might not be against counterfeiting, or might not agree that it's a serious problem. Actually, I have very little opinion on the usefulness of trying to block counterfeiting: in a world of competing priorities, I'm far from convinced that there aren't better things for law-enforcement agencies to be doing with their time. And as for calling it a "serious problem", well, the entire thrust of the article was that no one has a clue whether it's a serious problem or not.

The big intellectual-property (IP) debate – call it EFF vs Disney – is something that we bloggers are well aware of. In the real world, however – and for these purposes we can assume that the New York Sun op-ed page is part of that – I think there's more of a kneejerk feeling that strong IP laws are the bedrock of any advanced civilisation, and that fakes, knockoffs and the like are a grave threat. My argument in the op-ed was not that fakes are good, of course, it was simply that the anti-fake crew's numbers are bad. So I can see why the editors might have wanted to make that clear. But, just for the record, I do not believe that counterfeiting is a serious problem. A problem, maybe: a serious problem, no. Maybe if there were any reliable statistics on it, I might change my mind.

Posted by Felix at 17:48 EST

Comments

Wow...welcome to the wonderful world of magazine editing. (I occasionally do copy editing for a large municipal magazine.) The first edit I can buy, though it's essentially wussing out on their part. But the second is putting words in your mouth. By the date of the post, it's a little late to do anything other than what you've done, but if this sort of thing happens again, you're perfectly justified in writing a letter to the editor, for publication. At the very least I hope you called up the editor and took him to task in a friendly but firm manner for doing this...

Posted by: Robert L at 23:33 EST, January 18, 2005